Vision- The vision is beautiful, I love that light behind this boy- Ash Ketchum. A very loved character was put into this. How you hid parts of him or lightly blurred it fascinated me. But most of all, my eyes darted straight towards those brown eyes- atrracted at those two, brown objects in a second. But the one thing that concerns me would be how skinny his neck looks, but that is probably just me.
Originality- You don't necessarily see beautiful pieces of work featuring Ash Ketchum like this. You don't see many pictures of him reaching out at you, as if willing to take your hand. I love the amazing lineart and how much smoother it sustained itself.
Technique: Obviously, this part was especially good as well. The way you drew everything into a slightly chibi related character was extraordinary.
Impact: Draws you closer to the character. I don't know if those are tears or not, but that light in the background, which hides nearly everything- gorgeous. Well thought out color palette and beautiful shading.